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Docsp-30873: clarifying filters on builders pg #112
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| - Items that cost $0 to $25 | ||
| - A hotel with amenities that include an indoor swimming pool and free parking | ||
| - A food critic review that mentions "spicy" | ||
| - Items that cost more than $0 but less than $25 |
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Nit: Add a period at the end of each bullet as these are complete sentences.
| - Items that cost more than $0 but less than $25 | |
| - Items that cost more than $0 but less than $25. |
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| Filters are the operations MongoDB uses to limit your results to what | ||
| you want to see. | ||
| Filters are operations used to limit the results of a query based on | ||
| specific conditions. Filters are a helpful tool to locate the |
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Nit: is it specific conditions or "the specified conditions"?
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good call! I like that a lot more.
| you want to see. | ||
| Filters are operations used to limit the results of a query based on | ||
| specific conditions. Filters are a helpful tool to locate the | ||
| information needed based on search conditions. |
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| information needed based on search conditions. | |
| Filters are a helpful tool to locate information that matches search conditions in a collection. |
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LGTM
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# Pull Request Info [PR Reviewing Guidelines](https://github.com/mongodb/docs-java/blob/master/REVIEWING.md) [JIRA](https://jira.mongodb.org/browse/DOCSP-30873) [Staging ](https://docs-mongodbcom-staging.corp.mongodb.com/kotlin/docsworker-xlarge/DOCSP-30873-Clarifying-Filters-on-Builders-pg/fundamentals/builders/filters/) ## Self-Review Checklist - [x] Is this free of any warnings or errors in the RST? - [x] Did you run a spell-check? - [x] Did you run a grammar-check? - [x] Are all the links working? There was a suggestion to remove filter usage example, but I think it improves understanding for someone new to filters. Very open to suggestions however! Also my change might be a bit redundant but again I think it makes it clearer for someone who might not understand the jargon. (cherry picked from commit ff57fa1)
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There was a suggestion to remove filter usage example, but I think it improves understanding for someone new to filters. Very open to suggestions however! Also my change might be a bit redundant but again I think it makes it clearer for someone who might not understand the jargon.