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@lcawl lcawl commented Jan 23, 2019

Related to elastic/docs#407
This PR replaces occurrences of {security} or "X-Pack Security" with the new {security-features}, {stack-security-features}, or {es-security-features} terminology.

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I left a couple of suggestions

Authorization is the process of determining whether the user behind an incoming
request is allowed to execute the request.
The {stack-security-features} introduce the concept of _authorization_ to the
{stack}. Authorization is the process of determining whether the user behind an
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The repeated use of "stack" feels a little off. We may need to phrase this quite differently if we to avoid describing {security} as being something extra that's added to the stack.
Maybe:

The {stack-security-features} include support for the concept of _authorization_.

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Thanks @tvernum , I change it to: "The {stack-security-features} add authorization, which is the process of determining whether the user..."

@lcawl lcawl merged commit ce0494c into elastic:master Mar 4, 2019
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