From f252cfa2d4709c44bf7e9dd02e522e8e372482bc Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Michael Tiller Date: Tue, 19 Apr 2016 12:34:33 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 1/3] Update ownership.md Opening sentence was confusing and something cannot be "one of the most unique" (it either is or is not unique). --- src/doc/book/ownership.md | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/src/doc/book/ownership.md b/src/doc/book/ownership.md index 988103a118032..e2e0403b738fa 100644 --- a/src/doc/book/ownership.md +++ b/src/doc/book/ownership.md @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ % Ownership -This guide is one of three presenting Rust’s ownership system. This is one of -Rust’s most unique and compelling features, with which Rust developers should +This is the first of three sections presenting Rust’s ownership system. This is one of +Rust’s most distinct and compelling features, with which Rust developers should become quite acquainted. Ownership is how Rust achieves its largest goal, memory safety. There are a few distinct concepts, each with its own chapter: From 864eba884d860d7d0bfceb89af1a4bc690f21ea0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Michael Tiller Date: Tue, 19 Apr 2016 12:38:39 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 2/3] Opening sentence was confusing and something cannot be "one of the most unique" (it either is or is not unique). --- src/doc/book/references-and-borrowing.md | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/src/doc/book/references-and-borrowing.md b/src/doc/book/references-and-borrowing.md index a08d53f958ba3..dc6f885487c1f 100644 --- a/src/doc/book/references-and-borrowing.md +++ b/src/doc/book/references-and-borrowing.md @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ % References and Borrowing -This guide is two of three presenting Rust’s ownership system. This is one of -Rust’s most unique and compelling features, with which Rust developers should +This is the second of three sections presenting Rust’s ownership system. This is one of +Rust’s most distinct and compelling features, with which Rust developers should become quite acquainted. Ownership is how Rust achieves its largest goal, memory safety. There are a few distinct concepts, each with its own chapter: From f7ec6873ccfbf7dcdbd1908c0857c866b3e7087a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Michael Tiller Date: Tue, 19 Apr 2016 12:39:31 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 3/3] Opening sentence was confusing and something cannot be "one of the most unique" (it either is or is not unique). --- src/doc/book/lifetimes.md | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/src/doc/book/lifetimes.md b/src/doc/book/lifetimes.md index 695b1614fb70c..cb0757318984d 100644 --- a/src/doc/book/lifetimes.md +++ b/src/doc/book/lifetimes.md @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ % Lifetimes -This guide is three of three presenting Rust’s ownership system. This is one of -Rust’s most unique and compelling features, with which Rust developers should +This is the last of three sections presenting Rust’s ownership system. This is one of +Rust’s most distinct and compelling features, with which Rust developers should become quite acquainted. Ownership is how Rust achieves its largest goal, memory safety. There are a few distinct concepts, each with its own chapter: