Hojo code review

Co-authored-by: hojo-odoo <[email protected]>

Author: Felicious

content/applications/inventory_and_mrp/inventory/management/misc/cluster_picking.rst

@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ Cluster picking is an advanced order fulfillment approached derived from :ref:`b
 designated for specific a sales order (SO). Then, the picker travels to each storage location and
 places the products directly in the package related to the customer order.
 
-This method is most efficient for medium-sized companies with high order volumes and few different
+This method is most efficient for medium-sized companies with high order volumes relatively few unique
 products, since the method eliminates the need for sorting products into packages for customers
 after picking. Disadvantages of cluster picking are that urgent orders cannot be prioritized and
 optimized batches must be manually created beforehand, so the picking process can lead to
@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ To enable cluster picking, begin by navigating to :menuselection:`Inventory app
    :align: center
    :alt: Activate *Packages* and *Batch Transfers* features in the settings.
 
-Since batch picking is a method to optimize the *pick* operation in Odoo, the :guilabel:`Storage
+Since batch picking is used to optimize the *pick* operation in Odoo, the :guilabel:`Storage
 Locations` and :guilabel:`Multi-Step Routes` options under the :guilabel:`Warehouse` heading must
 also be checked on this settings page. When finished, click :guilabel:`Save`.
 
@@ -64,18 +64,18 @@ also be checked on this settings page. When finished, click :guilabel:`Save`.
 Packages setup
 --------------
 
-After the :guilabel:`Packages` feature is enabled, set up the packages before the picking, in the
-:menuselection:`Inventory app --> Products --> Packages` page. Click the :guilabel:`New` button to
+After the :guilabel:`Packages` feature is enabled, navigate to
+:menuselection:`Inventory app --> Products --> Packages`, and click the :guilabel:`New` button to
 create a new package.
 
-On the package form for creating a new package, the :guilabel:`Package Reference` is pre-filled to
+On the new package form, the :guilabel:`Package Reference` is pre-filled with
 the next available `PACK` number in the system. :guilabel:`Pack Date` is automatically set to the
 creation date of the form.
 
 For the :guilabel:`Package Use` field, the :guilabel:`Disposable Box` radio option should be
-selected if the package is a shipping container. On the contrary, the :guilabel:`Reusable Box`
+selected if the package is a shipping container. Alternatively, the :guilabel:`Reusable Box`
 option should be selected if the package is simply used as a method of grouping products from the
-same |SO| together and the products are intended to be moved to the intended shipping container at
+same |SO| together before they are moved to the intended shipping container at
 the output location.
 
 .. seealso::
@@ -94,15 +94,15 @@ Create cluster batch
 ====================
 
 To see how cluster picking works in Odoo, navigate to the *Sales* app and create |SOS| that will be
-fulfilled together in the same batch. After confirming the |SO|, the :guilabel:`Delivery` smart
+fulfilled together in the same batch. After confirming an |SO|, the :guilabel:`Delivery` smart
 button becomes visible. Displayed inside the icon is a number representing the amount of steps in
 the outgoing shipment process.
 
 .. example::
    Begin by creating three |SOS| for the apples, oranges, and bananas as shown in the :ref:`example
    above <inventory/misc/cluster_picking/example>`.
 
-   After confirming the |SO|, the :guilabel:`Delivery` smart button will be shown with the number
+   After confirming an |SO|, the :guilabel:`Delivery` smart button will display the number
    `2`, indicating that there are two operations to complete: `Pick` and `Delivery`.
 
    .. image:: cluster_picking/create-sales-order.png
@@ -145,7 +145,7 @@ Doing so opens an :guilabel:`Add to batch` pop-up window, wherein the employee
 Choose from the two radio options to add to :guilabel:`an existing batch transfer` or create
 :guilabel:`a new batch transfer`.
 
-To begin with a draft, select the :guilabel:`Draft` checkbox.
+To create draft batches pickings to be confirmed at a later date, select the :guilabel:`Draft` checkbox.
 
 Conclude the process by clicking :guilabel:`Confirm`.
 
@@ -194,7 +194,7 @@ In Barcode
 To process cluster pickings directly from *Barcode*, select the :guilabel:`Batch Transfers` button
 from the *Barcode* dashboard. Then, select the desired card for the batch.
 
-In the batch transfer screen, the products in the picking are grouped by location, and each line is
+On the batch transfer screen, the products in the picking are grouped by location, and each line is
 color-coded to associate products in the same picking together.
 
 Then, follow the prompt to :guilabel:`Scan the source location` barcode for the storage location the
@@ -207,7 +207,7 @@ transfer. Repeat this for all products and click the :guilabel:`Validate` button
    need products from this particular location.
 
    Scan the barcode for the apple, which highlights the picking labeled in red for the product
-   `Apple` at for the picking, `WH/PICK/00007`.
+   `Apple`, for the picking, `WH/PICK/00007`.
 
    Then, scan the `CLUSTER-PACK-1` package barcode, and place the product in the designated package.