From f8778e2f9e729e2e030f02a1c5898ed8364ff808 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: kay <kay.kim@10gen.com>
Date: Mon, 12 Nov 2012 15:09:55 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] DOCS-535 minor edits from this morning

---
 .../table-sql-to-mongo-schema-examples.yaml   | 46 ++++++-------------
 .../table-sql-to-mongo-select-examples.yaml   |  9 +---
 2 files changed, 15 insertions(+), 40 deletions(-)

diff --git a/source/includes/table-sql-to-mongo-schema-examples.yaml b/source/includes/table-sql-to-mongo-schema-examples.yaml
index 7277eacf8ee..e1f0cc0a240 100644
--- a/source/includes/table-sql-to-mongo-schema-examples.yaml
+++ b/source/includes/table-sql-to-mongo-schema-examples.yaml
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ mongo1: |
                status: "A"
             } )
 
-        However, you can also explicitly create a table:
+        However, you can also explicitly create a collection:
 
         .. code-block:: javascript
            :emphasize-lines: 1
@@ -59,44 +59,26 @@ sql2: |
          ALTER TABLE users
          ADD join_date DATETIME
 mongo2: |
-        Update operations can add fields to all documents in a
-        collection:
-
-        .. code-block:: javascript
-           :emphasize-lines: 1-5
-
-           db.users.update(
-               { }, 
-               { $set: { join_date: null } },
-               { multi: 1 }
-           )
-
-        Because each :term:`document` determines its own fields, a
-        document may contain fields not contained by the other
-        documents in the collection.
+        Collections do not describe or enforce the structure of the
+        constituent documents. See the :wiki:`Schema Design
+        <Schema+Design>` wiki page for more information.
 ref2: |
       See :method:`update() <db.collection.update()>` and
-      :operator:`$set` for more information.
+      :operator:`$set` for more information on changing the structure
+      of documents in a collection.
 sql3: |
       .. code-block:: sql
 
          ALTER TABLE users
          DROP COLUMN join_date
 mongo3: |
-        Update operations can remove fields from all documents in a
-        collection:
-
-        .. code-block:: javascript
-           :emphasize-lines: 1-5
-
-           db.users.update( 
-               { }, 
-               { $unset: { join_date: "" } },
-               { multi: 1 }
-           )
+        Collections do not describe or enforce the structure of the
+        constituent documents. See the :wiki:`Schema Design
+        <Schema+Design>` wiki page for more information.
 ref3: |
-      See :method:`update() <db.collection.update()>`
-      and :operator:`$unset` for more information.
+      See :method:`update() <db.collection.update()>` and
+      :operator:`$set` for more information on changing the structure
+      of documents in a collection.
 sql4: |
       .. code-block:: sql
 
@@ -129,8 +111,8 @@ mongo6: |
         .. code-block:: javascript
            :emphasize-lines: 1
 
-           db.users.remove()
+           db.users.drop()
 ref6: |
-      See :method:`remove() <db.collection.remove()>` for
+      See :method:`drop() <db.collection.drop()>` for
       more information.
 ...
diff --git a/source/includes/table-sql-to-mongo-select-examples.yaml b/source/includes/table-sql-to-mongo-select-examples.yaml
index 4e75e2a9f67..cbe56aa5f82 100644
--- a/source/includes/table-sql-to-mongo-select-examples.yaml
+++ b/source/includes/table-sql-to-mongo-select-examples.yaml
@@ -42,14 +42,7 @@ mongo1: |
         .. code-block:: javascript
            :emphasize-lines: 1
 
-           db.users.find( )
-
-        *or*
-
-        .. code-block:: javascript
-           :emphasize-lines: 1
-
-           db.users.find( { } )
+           db.users.find()
 ref1: |
       See :method:`find() <db.collection.find()>`
       for more information.