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jeff-allen-mongo · jeff-allen-mongo · commit ff391e91eb0f · 2020-08-26T13:32:33.000-04:00
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 18 August 2020 Release
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-- Improves :ref:`$out <adl-out-stage>` to S3 write performance.
+- Improves :ref:`$out <adl-out-stage>` to |s3| write performance.
 
-- General Performance and Stability improvements.
+- Includes general performance and stability improvements.
 
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