DOCS-2179: edit

Author: Sam Kleinman

source/reference/operator/meta/natural.txt

@@ -46,19 +46,20 @@ Use ``-1`` to return documents in the reverse order as they occur on disk:
 Natural Order Comparison
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
-In this scenario:
+To demonstrate natural ordering:
 
-- Create an extra index as { normal: 1 }.
+- Create an ``{ normal: 1 }`` index on a collection (e.g. ``coll``).
 
-- Insert relevant objects with ``_id`` and ``normal`` values, for example,
-  a string type object created with:
+- Insert relevant objects with ``_id`` and ``normal`` values, for
+  example, a document with ``_id`` and ``normal`` fields that both
+  hold the same string:
 
   .. code-block:: javascript
 
      db.coll.insert( { _id: "01", normal: "01" } )
 
-- Use a different type for member values for each distinct object, with the
-  same values in each object.
+- Use values with different types for each document, but both fields
+  in the document should have the same value:
 
 - Use ``.find().sort().explain()`` for all operations.
 
@@ -71,10 +72,10 @@ and a description of the :method:`~cursor.explain()` method output:
    :header-rows: 2
    :widths: 20 25 25 25
 
-   * - 
-     - 
+   * -
+     -
      - :method:`~cursor.sort()`
-     - 
+     -
 
    * - :method:`~db.collection.find()`
      - :operator:`$natural`:1