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Co-authored-by: Nick Villahermosa <[email protected]>

Author: ianf-mongodb

source/release-notes.txt

@@ -18,8 +18,8 @@ Release Notes
 
 New features:
 
-- Query converter is now in public preview. For details on using 
-  the query converter see :ref:`rm-enable-query-converter`.
+- Query converter is now in public preview. For details, 
+  see :ref:`rm-enable-query-converter`.
 - Query converter now requires you to sign into a MongoDB Atlas 
   account. When you sign into Atlas, the process for
   selecting Atlas clusters in a sync job is dynamically populated.
@@ -28,12 +28,12 @@ New features:
 
 Improvements:
 
-- Query converter now allows SQL queries and views to be converted 
+- Query converter now allows you to convert SQL queries and views 
   to C#, Java, or JavaScript.
 
 Bug fixes:
 
-- Various minor improvements to job recoverability and metrics.
+- Minor improvements to job recoverability and metrics.
 
 1.4.6 Changelog
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