@@ -25,21 +25,23 @@ To complete this part of the tutorial, you will need to have completed:
2525- **Part 1:** :doc:`Upload sample data to your S3 bucket </tutorial/load-sample-data>`
2626- **Part 2:** :doc:`/tutorial/deploy`
2727
28- Whitelist Your Connection IP Address
29- ------------------------------------
28+ Add Your Connection IP Address to Your IP Access List
29+ -----------------------------------------------------
3030
3131.. note::
3232
33- If your IP is already whitelisted and you created a MongoDB
34- user, you can skip to :ref:`data-lake-connect`.
33+ If the IP access list for your project already includes your IP
34+ address and you created a MongoDB database user, you can skip to
35+ :ref:`data-lake-connect`.
3536
3637*Estimated completion time: 2 minutes*
3738
3839An :abbr:`IP address (Internet Protocal address)` is a unique numeric
3940identifier for a device connecting to a network. Within |service|, you
4041can create a list of trusted IP addresses that can connect to your
41- {+data-lake-short+} and access your data. |service| only allows connections
42- to a {+data-lake-short+} from addresses listed in the IP whitelist.
42+ {+data-lake-short+} and access your data. |service| allows connections
43+ to a {+data-lake-short+} only from addresses listed in the IP access
44+ list.
4345
4446.. include:: /includes/steps/data-lake-whitelist.rst
4547
@@ -48,8 +50,9 @@ Create a Database User for Your {+data-lake-short+}
4850
4951.. note::
5052
51- If your IP is already whitelisted and you created a MongoDB
52- database user, you can skip to :ref:`data-lake-connect`.
53+ If the IP access list for your project already includes your IP
54+ address and you created a MongoDB database user, you can skip to
55+ :ref:`data-lake-connect`.
5356
5457*Estimated completion time: 2 minutes*
5558
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