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DOCSP-14682 fix terminology: Whitelist to IP Access List (#128)
* DOCSP-14682 fix terminology: Whitelist to IP Access List * DOCSP-14682 updates for copy review feedback
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source/includes/steps-getting-started-whitelist.yaml

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file: steps-connect-shell.yaml
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ref: getting-started-connect-dialog
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---
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title: "Configure your whitelist entry."
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title: "Click :guilabel:`Add Your Current IP Address`."
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ref: getting-started-whitelist-info
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level: 4
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content: |
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In the :guilabel:`Whitelist your connection IP address` step,
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click :guilabel:`Add Your Current IP Address`.
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The menu expands to show the :guilabel:`Add a connection IP address`
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modal.
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.. figure:: /images/getting-started-add-your-ip-to-whitelist.png
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:alt: Screenshot of adding IP address to whitelist.
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:figwidth: 600px
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---
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title: "Click :guilabel:`Add IP Address`."
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title: "Enter your IP address and an optional description, then click
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:guilabel:`Add IP Address`."
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ref: getting-started-whitelist-confirm
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source/tutorial/connect.txt

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- **Part 1:** :doc:`Upload sample data to your S3 bucket </tutorial/load-sample-data>`
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- **Part 2:** :doc:`/tutorial/deploy`
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Whitelist Your Connection IP Address
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Add Your Connection IP Address to Your IP Access List
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.. note::
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If your IP is already whitelisted and you created a MongoDB
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user, you can skip to :ref:`data-lake-connect`.
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If the IP access list for your project already includes your IP
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address and you created a MongoDB database user, you can skip to
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:ref:`data-lake-connect`.
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*Estimated completion time: 2 minutes*
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An :abbr:`IP address (Internet Protocal address)` is a unique numeric
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identifier for a device connecting to a network. Within |service|, you
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can create a list of trusted IP addresses that can connect to your
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{+data-lake-short+} and access your data. |service| only allows connections
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to a {+data-lake-short+} from addresses listed in the IP whitelist.
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{+data-lake-short+} and access your data. |service| allows connections
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to a {+data-lake-short+} only from addresses listed in the IP access
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list.
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.. include:: /includes/steps/data-lake-whitelist.rst
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.. note::
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If your IP is already whitelisted and you created a MongoDB
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database user, you can skip to :ref:`data-lake-connect`.
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If the IP access list for your project already includes your IP
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address and you created a MongoDB database user, you can skip to
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:ref:`data-lake-connect`.
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*Estimated completion time: 2 minutes*
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