CR review

Author: rachel-mack

source/style-guide/includes/terms/d.rst

@@ -110,7 +110,7 @@ D
 
    disabled
      :icon-fa4:`exclamation-triangle` Use *inactive* to describe
-     commands, toggled options, or buttons on the interface. Use
+     commands, options, toggles, or buttons in the interface. Use
      *dimmed* to describe the appearance of an inactive command,
      option, or button; use *unavailable* to refer to its state. Don't
      use *disabled* to refer to individuals with disabilities.

source/style-guide/includes/terms/f.rst

@@ -4,10 +4,10 @@ F
 .. glossary::
 
    fail to
-     :icon-fa4:`times-circle` Use *unable to* instead when referring to an individual or
+     :icon-fa4:`times-circle` Use *unable to* when you when refer to an individual or
      company. 
 
-     Use of *fail* is acceptable to describe the performance of a system.
+     You may use *fail* to describe system performance.
 
    FAQ
      Use the acronym *FAQ* to refer to an article or section that

source/style-guide/writing/use-positive-statements.txt

@@ -32,8 +32,8 @@ Avoid Negative Words
 --------------------
 
 Try to avoid the following negative words, using instead the suggested alternatives,
-particularly in reference to the user or the company. However, always be honest and
-transparent about issues, and accurately describe a system's performance.
+particularly in reference to the user or the company. However, always communicate honestly and
+transparently about issues, and accurately describe a system's performance.
 
 .. list-table::
    :widths: 50 50