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Author: JuliaMongo

source/connect-atlas-cli.txt

@@ -97,13 +97,11 @@ Complete the Prerequisites
       - :ref:`Install the {+atlas-cli+} <install-atlas-cli>`.
       - Add your host's IP address to the :ref:`IP access list <access-list>`.
 
-        If you log into the {+atlas-cli+} with your Atlas user credentials,
-        and your organization's owners enable
-        :atlas:`IP access list for the Atlas UI for an organization
+        If you authenticate with your |service| user credentials
+        and your organization's owners enable :atlas:`IP access list for the Atlas UI for an organization
         </tutorial/manage-organizations/#require-ip-access-list-for-the-atlas-ui>`,
-        then to run any commands in this organization, your IP address must
-        be included in the IP access list or CIDR ranges defined in that list.
-        To learn more, see :atlas:`Require IP Access List for the Atlas UI
+        your IP address must be added to the IP access list to run commands
+        in this organization. To learn more, see :atlas:`Require IP Access List for the Atlas UI
         </tutorial/manage-organizations/#require-ip-access-list-for-the-atlas-ui>`.