tech review feedback

Author: davidhou17

source/whats-new.txt

@@ -23,7 +23,8 @@ What's New in 1.14.1
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 - Added support for the new Kafka SystemTime pattern, ``Time.SYSTEM``. 
-  This fixes an issue introduced in Apache Kafka version 3.9.
+  This fixes an issue introduced in Apache Kafka version 3.9 around the 
+  Kafka SystemTime class.
 
 .. _kafka-connector-whats-new-1.14: