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Author: mongoKart

source/fundamentals/crud/write-operations/bulk-write.txt

@@ -21,13 +21,10 @@ Overview
 --------
 
 This guide shows you how to use the {+driver-short+} to perform **bulk write operations**
-that include multiple write operations in a single database call.
-
-Consider a scenario in which you want to insert a document into a collection,
-update multiple other documents, then delete a document. If you use
-individual methods, each operation requires its own database call. If you use
-a bulk write operation, you can improve efficiency by performing multiple write
-operations in a single database call.
+from your ``MongoClient`` instance. A bulk write operation is a single database call
+that performs multiple write operations on one or more MongoDB collections. This is more
+efficient than performing multiple individual write operations because it reduces the
+number of round trips between your application and the database.
 
 Sample Data
 ~~~~~~~~~~~

source/whats-new.txt

@@ -152,8 +152,8 @@ The 3.0 driver release includes the following new features:
   To learn more about using the aggregation pipeline with the {+driver-short+}, see
   :ref:`csharp-aggregation`.
 
-- Adds an API for bulk write operations. To learn more about bulk write operations, see
-  :ref:`csharp-bulk-write`.
+- Adds a ``MongoClient`` API for bulk write operations. To learn more about bulk write
+  operations, see :ref:`csharp-bulk-write`.
 
 For more information about this release, see the :github:`v3.0 release notes
 </mongodb/mongo-csharp-driver/releases/tag/v3.0.0>`.