[basic.start.dynamic] Convert long conditional sentence to bulleted form.

Author: zygoloid

source/basic.tex

@@ -2630,11 +2630,20 @@
 \item
 If \tcode{V} has partially-ordered initialization, \tcode{W} does not have
 unordered initialization, and \tcode{V} is defined before \tcode{W} in
-every translation unit in which \tcode{W} is defined, the initialization of
-\tcode{V} is sequenced before the initialization of \tcode{W} if the
-program does not start a thread~(\ref{intro.multithread})
-other than the main thread~(\ref{basic.start.main})
-and otherwise strongly happens before the initialization of \tcode{W}.
+every translation unit in which \tcode{W} is defined, then
+\begin{itemize}
+\item
+if the program starts a thread~(\ref{intro.multithread})
+other than the main thread~(\ref{basic.start.main}),
+the initialization of \tcode{V}
+strongly happens before
+the initialization of \tcode{W};
+\item
+otherwise,
+the initialization of \tcode{V}
+is sequenced before
+the initialization of \tcode{W}.
+\end{itemize}
 
 \item
 Otherwise, if the program starts a thread
@@ -2670,7 +2679,7 @@
 defined in the same translation unit as the variable to be initialized.%
 \footnote{A non-local variable with static storage duration
 having initialization
-with side effects is initialized in this case
+with side effects is initialized in this case,
 even if it is not itself odr-used (\ref{basic.def.odr},~\ref{basic.stc.static}).}
 It is \impldef{threads and program points at which deferred dynamic initialization is performed}
 in which threads and at which points in the program such deferred dynamic initialization occurs.

source/intro.tex

@@ -1336,7 +1336,7 @@
 \item \placeholder{A} strongly happens before \placeholder{X} and \placeholder{X} strongly happens before \placeholder{B}.
 \end{itemize}
 \begin{note}
-In the absence of consume operations
+In the absence of consume operations,
 the happens before and strongly happens before relations are identical.
 Strongly happens before essentially excludes consume operations.
 \end{note}