P1123R0 Editorial Guidance for merging P0019r8 and P0528r3

Author: Dawn Perchik

source/atomics.tex

@@ -848,7 +848,8 @@
 
 \pnum
 \effects Retrieves the value in \tcode{expected}.
-It then atomically compares the value referenced by \tcode{*ptr} for equality
+It then atomically compares the value representation of
+the value referenced by \tcode{*ptr} for equality
 with that previously retrieved from \tcode{expected},
 and if \tcode{true}, replaces the value referenced by \tcode{*ptr}
 with that in \tcode{desired}.
@@ -865,7 +866,7 @@
 the value \tcode{memory_order_relaxed}.
 If and only if the comparison is \tcode{false} then,
 after the atomic operation,
-the contents of the memory in \tcode{expected} are replaced by
+the value in \tcode{expected} is replaced by
 the value read from the value referenced by \tcode{*ptr}
 during the atomic comparison.
 If the operation returns \tcode{true},