Fix sentences in Live first paragraph (#3965)

Co-authored-by: Ives van Hoorne <[email protected]>

Author: johansenja

.all-contributorsrc

@@ -1531,6 +1531,15 @@
       "contributions": [
         "code"
       ]
+    },
+    {
+      "login": "johansenja",
+      "name": "johansenja",
+      "avatar_url": "https://avatars1.githubusercontent.com/u/43235608?v=4",
+      "profile": "https://github.com/johansenja",
+      "contributions": [
+        "doc"
+      ]
     }
   ],
   "contributorsPerLine": 7,

README.md

@@ -251,6 +251,7 @@ Thanks goes to these wonderful people
   <tr>
     <td align="center"><a href="http://mcmunder.de"><img src="https://avatars3.githubusercontent.com/u/5681686?v=4" width="100px;" alt=""/><br /><sub><b>Matthias Christoph Munder</b></sub></a><br /><a href="https://github.com/codesandbox/codesandbox-client/issues?q=author%3Amcmunder" title="Bug reports">🐛</a> <a href="https://github.com/codesandbox/codesandbox-client/commits?author=mcmunder" title="Code">💻</a></td>
     <td align="center"><a href="http://anuraghazra.github.io"><img src="https://avatars3.githubusercontent.com/u/35374649?v=4" width="100px;" alt=""/><br /><sub><b>Anurag Hazra</b></sub></a><br /><a href="https://github.com/codesandbox/codesandbox-client/commits?author=anuraghazra" title="Code">💻</a></td>
+    <td align="center"><a href="https://github.com/johansenja"><img src="https://avatars1.githubusercontent.com/u/43235608?v=4" width="100px;" alt=""/><br /><sub><b>johansenja</b></sub></a><br /><a href="https://github.com/codesandbox/codesandbox-client/commits?author=johansenja" title="Documentation">📖</a></td>
   </tr>
 </table>
 

packages/homepage/content/docs/2-live.md

@@ -9,11 +9,8 @@ description:
 
 All sandboxes on CodeSandbox are live, meaning you can share your sandbox with
 others for real time collaboration on code. You can simultaneously create,
-delete, edit for real time collaboration on code. You can simultaneously create,
 delete, edit and move files and code with others in a sandbox, as well as chat
-about your and move files and code with others in a sandbox, as well as chat
-about your changes. It's like Google Docs, but for coding. changes. It's like
-Google Docs, but for coding.
+about your changes. It's like Google Docs, but for coding.
 
 ![Live mode](./images/live-screenshot.png?v1)