post-review updates

Author: chalin

public/docs/ts/_cache/tutorial/toh-pt6.jade

@@ -97,10 +97,12 @@ block backend
     The  `InMemoryWebApiModule` replaces the default `Http` client backend —
     the supporting service that talks to the remote server —
     with an  _in-memory web API alternative service_.
+
   +makeExcerpt(_appModuleTsVsMainTs, 'in-mem-web-api', '')
+
   :marked
     The `forRoot` configuration method takes an `InMemoryDataService` class
-    that will prime the in-memory database as follows:
+    that primes the in-memory database as follows:
 
 +makeExample('app/in-memory-data.service.ts', 'init')(format='.')
 
@@ -126,7 +128,7 @@ block dont-be-distracted-by-backend-subst
 
 :marked
   We returned a !{_Promise} resolved with mock heroes.
-  It may have seemed like an overkill at the time, but we were anticipating the
+  It may have seemed like overkill at the time, but we were anticipating the
   day when we fetched heroes with an HTTP client and we knew that would have to be an asynchronous operation.
 
   That day has arrived! Let's convert `getHeroes()` to use HTTP.
@@ -140,7 +142,7 @@ block dont-be-distracted-by-backend-subst
 
 - var _h3id = `http-${_promise}`
 :marked
-  Refresh the browser and the hero data should be successfully loaded from the
+  Refresh the browser, and the hero data should be successfully loaded from the
   mock server.
 
   <h3 id="!{_h3id}">HTTP !{_Promise}</h3>

public/docs/ts/latest/tutorial/toh-pt6.jade

@@ -97,10 +97,12 @@ block backend
     The  `InMemoryWebApiModule` replaces the default `Http` client backend —
     the supporting service that talks to the remote server —
     with an  _in-memory web API alternative service_.
+
   +makeExcerpt(_appModuleTsVsMainTs, 'in-mem-web-api', '')
+
   :marked
     The `forRoot` configuration method takes an `InMemoryDataService` class
-    that will prime the in-memory database as follows:
+    that primes the in-memory database as follows:
 
 +makeExample('app/in-memory-data.service.ts', 'init')(format='.')
 
@@ -126,7 +128,7 @@ block dont-be-distracted-by-backend-subst
 
 :marked
   We returned a !{_Promise} resolved with mock heroes.
-  It may have seemed like an overkill at the time, but we were anticipating the
+  It may have seemed like overkill at the time, but we were anticipating the
   day when we fetched heroes with an HTTP client and we knew that would have to be an asynchronous operation.
 
   That day has arrived! Let's convert `getHeroes()` to use HTTP.
@@ -140,7 +142,7 @@ block dont-be-distracted-by-backend-subst
 
 - var _h3id = `http-${_promise}`
 :marked
-  Refresh the browser and the hero data should be successfully loaded from the
+  Refresh the browser, and the hero data should be successfully loaded from the
   mock server.
 
   <h3 id="!{_h3id}">HTTP !{_Promise}</h3>